Comfy curled away in my little dark
Space. Wrapped around me I find
Many layers. Keeping me so warm,
And keeping the darkness close to me.
Then...That dreadful thing begins
To happen. The brightness slowly
Crawls into my little safe place, a
Little bit and soon a huge light shine.
There’s nothing to block this evil light,
So I wriggle and squirm, to find a new
Way to hide. So I pull the layers up over
My head and the darkness is back.
However, my newfound haven is soon,
Disturbed by the loud noises from outside.
The squeaks and the crowing, and they
Think they’re singing...I don’t think so.
Oh, I hate the mornings!!! With that evil
Sunlight, spoiling my lovely darkness.
Then that horrid dawn chorus, when
Will I just get peace to sleep!
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Ok Deviant decided it didnt like how i had arranged it.... so i had to attempt to do it again...doesnt look as good now, sadly
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well, i did like it, my only complaint is the figurative language. I dont see much of it. Try and discribe a little more specifically, like how dark the darkness is. heres an example...
"It was as light as the pearly gates"
I know, that one was kinda half-assed (pardon my french, and my simile not your poem) and im sorry for that, but otherwise you're doing great
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And yeh, i admit it was lacking in descriptive-ness...but i wrote for what it as about...lack of sleep, lol..Probably should have waited till i had woken up a bit
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